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Kara Smith
University of Windsor
Summer 2001
"You
won't mind, Harry, if I use a Quick-Quotes Quill? It leaves me free
to talk to you normally..."
"A what?" said Harry.
Rita Skeeter's smile widened. Harry counted three gold teeth. She reached
again into her crocodile bag, and drew out a long acid-green quill and
a roll of parchment, which she stretched out between them on a crate
of Mrs. Skower's All-Purpose Magical Mess-Remover. She put the tip of
the green quill into her mouth, and sucked it for a moment with apparent
relish, then placed it upright on the parchment, where it stood balanced
on its point, quivering slightly.
"Testing...my name is Rita Skeeter, Daily Prophet reporter."
Harry looked down quickly at the quill. The moment Rita Skeeter had
spoken, the green quill had started to scribble, skidding across the
parchment:
Attractive
blonde Rita Skeeter, forty-three, whose savage quill has punctured many
inflated reputations -
Rowling,
J.K. (2000) Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. 266-267.
Introduction
A novel studied at the grade
seven level in South-Western Ontario is J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter.
Integrated curriculum for this novel is currently being developed by
the University of Windsor. In creating any curriculum for novel-based
study, one of the most difficult challenges is bringing the text to
life for the students. This has proved to be particularly challenging
with the Harry Potter series since the books are based in another
world of "wizardry and magic." One creative writing exercise
being developed for the curriculum is a "Quick-Quills" article (excerpt
above). The SMART Board seemed to be a logical use of technology for
the development of this particular activity, since it introduced an
element of "magic" into an ordinary classroom, or could possibly
enable one portion of the curriculum to mirror the "magic reporter's
pen" in the novel(s).
As a result, pre-service teachers and grade seven students from local
Windsor classrooms were arbitrarily chosen to work in control (blackboard)
and test (SMART Board) groups to test the following question related
to the curricular development of this activity: Does the SMART Board
enable a higher level of curricular creative writing responses (as defined
by the Torrance Tests of Creative Thinking), or are the SMART
Board responses equivalent to those created using a regular blackboard?
Research Design
The design of this research involved
two stages, each composed of a control (blackboard) group and a test
(SMART Board) group. The participants involved in the first stage of
the research were pre-service teachers; the participants in the second
stage were grade seven students.
During stage one of the research, the control
group, pre-service language arts teachers, brainstormed possible Quick-Quill
questions on the blackboard which Rowling's reporter Rita Skeeter might
have asked the character Harry. Using their notes from this session,
the class was then given one week's time to create ten Quick-Quill questions,
which, in turn, would be evaluated for the "most creative" based on
the Torrance Tests for Creativity (TTCT). A second, test group
of pre-service language arts teachers used the SMART Board to brainstorm
possible Quick-Quill questions. The SMART Board notes from this session
were then e-mailed to all of the participants (example of one such board
appears below), and the participants were given one week's time to create
ten Quick-Quill questions, which would also be assessed by TTCT.
The top questions, from both groups, receiving the highest TTCT
score, would be used during stage two of the research.
Stage two of the research used the top
ten "most creative"
Quick-Quill questions with a group of grade seven students. These students,
a control and test group, would then brainstorm (as in stage one) and
create answers to the Quick-Quill questions for character Rita Skeeter's
column in the Daily Prophet (Rowling 2000). These Quick-Quill
responses would, in turn, be evaluated for a TTCT score. The
group – control or test – to receive the highest overall TTCT
mean would be said to be the "more creative."
The number in each group was dependent
upon the enrolment of those particular classes and sections during the
school term. A breakdown of these numbers is as follows:
Stage One – Pre-service Teachers (Developing
Quick-Quill Questions)
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Control Group
(Blackboard)
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Test Group (SMART
Board)
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15
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35
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Stage Two – Grade Seven Students (Creating
Quick-Quill Answers)
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Control Group
(Blackboard)
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Test Group (SMART
Board)
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10
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11
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Both the Quick-Quill questions and
the Daily Prophet columns developed in the process of this research,
along with the TTCT scores of all of the groups, have been included
in this paper under their appropriate stages.
Stage One – Pre-service Language Arts
Teachers Create Quick-Quill Questions for Students
Following a brainstorming session,
two groups of pre-service teachers were asked to write ten Quick-Quill
questions that Daily Prophet Reporter Rita Skeeter might have
used in an interview. These questions were to be designed for the grade
seven level, and were meant to elicit sensational, heretical responses
(as a Quick-Quill would do). Questions developed would eventually be
tested on an actual grade seven class.
The first group, the test group, brainstormed
using the SMART Board (illustrated below). The SMART Board brainstorming
session was later e-mailed to the students in this group.

The second group, the control group, brainstormed
using a regular blackboard. Notes were taken. No further information
was e-mailed to the latter group. Both groups were required to submit
their top ten Quick-Quill questions for a grade seven class in one week's
time.
The Torrance Test of Creative Thinking
(TTCT) was used as the measurement of "creativity" for the above
questions. Those questions receiving a higher [fluency and] originality
score, were deemed to be "more creative."
The creative mean of the test group was
slightly higher than the creative mean of the control group. There were
31 questions developed from the SMART Board test group of 35 pre-service
teachers, and 15 questions developed from the blackboard control group
of 15 pre-service teachers. Rate of return was higher for the control
group due to the absence of technology. In the test group, two technological
problems existed which resulted in four null returns. Seven teachers
had difficulty accessing their e-mail (due to home server problems or
computer software incompatibility), and three teachers checked their
e-mail only once during the week (due to telephone cost), and as a result,
had less time to create questions. Thus, four sets of test questions
were returned later than the deadline of one week, and as a result,
were not admitted into the test group. The TTCT scores per participant
(based on one set of 10 questions each) were as follows:
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Control Group
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Test Group
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9
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24
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19
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23
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30
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14
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15
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15
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21
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28
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22
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16
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24
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19
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15
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18
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15
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20
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15
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17
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10
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9
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11
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13
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11
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10
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10
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22
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16
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14
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Mean = 16.2
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25
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14
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16
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20
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15
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18
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20
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16
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23
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22
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25
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17
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17
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55
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16
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20
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Mean = 19.39
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The test group's mean score was 19.39,
3.19 higher than the control group. Even if the one, extraordinary score
of 55 was removed from the test group due to its abnormal nature, there
is still a mean difference of 2.0. Ergo, the responses of the
pre-service teachers' SMART Board test group were "more creative" than
the blackboard control group.
The ten "most creative" questions developed
for grade seven students from the sets of questions submitted by both
groups were as follows:
- When you had the Philosopher's Stone in your pocket, did it cross
your mind to use it to make the nectar that allows everlasting life?
Would you even want to live forever? (Steve MacDonald)
- You did extremely well in your first attempt at flying, and that
was with a standard-issue school broomstick. Do you think having a
Nimbus 2000 will help you that much more, or could you be a Quidditch
champion with any broomstick? (Steve MacDonald)
- Did anyone ever call the child welfare authorities regarding your
Aunt Petunia and Uncle Vernon? Did you ever consider doing
this yourself regarding your situation? (Steve MacDonald)
- Why do you think Snape and Dumbledore have kept such a close watch
on you? (Jennifer Laforet)
- Wouldn't you have liked to perform a little magic on Malfoy to make
him pay for some of his nasty actions? (Janice Coleman-Sanagan)
- Do you think I am beautiful? Who is the most beautiful witch you
have met here at Hogwarts? (Brent Dyck)
- Many believe that Neville Longbottom should not belong to Gryffindor,
or for that matter, shouldn't be at Hogwarts at all, given that he
is such a klutz and a dimwit. What is your opinion on the matter of
muggles? (Anna Mancini)
- You lead people to believe that you are naïve, yet you insist
on using the real name of "he-who-shall-not-be-named" quite frequently.
Is this only an act? Is the real Harry Potter actually quite confident?
(Brent Reaume)
- During your evaluation, you were asked a question that required
your use of logic, not magic. Does it follow that you may not have
any real wizard skills at all? (Brent Reaume)
- What do you remember about your mother
and father; how does it feel being an orphan, and how do you feel
about the man who did this to your family Harry? (Diane Weiser)
The above questions were then given to
grade seven students during the week of March 12 to 16, 2001, in stage
two of the research. Students were then able to choose one from
the above ["most creative"] ten questions and write a Quick-Quill answer
to the question chosen based on the example provided in Harry Potter
and the Goblet of Fire. Because, in the first stage, the control
group was not provided with the same opportunity to review (as the test
group was via e-mail), it was thought that the technology, and subsequent
e-mail, may have simply served as a memory review, rather than a prompt
for "more creative responses." To eliminate this possibility, the control
group was given an oral/aural review in stage two of the research.
Stage Two – Grade Seven Students Answer
the Quick-Quill Questions in the Daily Prophet
During the week of March
12 to 16, 2001, grade seven students were able to choose one
Quick-Quill question from the top ten developed during stage one of
the research. To eliminate the possibility that the SMART Board simply
acted as a memory review (a possibility identified in stage one), an
additional oral/aural review was provided to the control group in this
stage of the research.
Ten students developed Quick-Quill answers
to the questions of their own individual choosing for the control group;
eleven students developed Quick-Quill answers to the questions of their
choosing for the SMART Board test group. There was a 100% return rate
from both groups, and no perceived technical problems receiving the
data.
All possible responses were first brainstormed
by the test group; an illustration of this SMART Board brainstorming
is below:

As in stage one, the Torrance Test of
Creative Thinking (TTCT) was used as the measurement of "creativity"
for the stage two creative writing responses. Those responses receiving
a higher [fluency and] originality score, were deemed to be "more creative."
The TTCT evaluates the [gifted] ability to produce new ideas
by bringing together elements usually thought of as independent or dissimilar.
Simply, each new thought or item within a piece of writing is counted.
Pieces of writing containing more unique elements are said to
be "more creative."
In this particular stage, the blackboard/control
group's writing outperformed the SMART Board test group; however, there
were some interesting gender distinctions, and the SMART Board group
preferred to write on one particular question, which may have hindered
their performance. The overall TTCT results of the two groups'
responses were as follows:
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Test Group
(SMART Board)
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Control Group
(Blackboard)
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| 4 |
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6 |
| 1 |
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11 |
| 3 |
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2 |
| 2 |
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2 |
| 8.5 |
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1.5 |
| 1 |
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4 |
| 5 |
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4 |
| 1.5 |
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4 |
| 1 |
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3 |
| 2.5 |
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2.5 |
| 1.5 |
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| Mean = 2.81 |
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Mean = 4.0 |
Exceptionalities (8.5 and 11) eliminated:
Test Mean = 2.25; Control Mean = 3.22
Thus, equalizing the review time between
the two groups, there appeared to be no significant increase in "creative"
writing responses from those students who brainstormed answers using
the SMART Board.
There were significantly more males than
females in this sample. Females, for example, outperformed their grade
six male counterparts on the 2000 EQAO standardized test (Ontario Ministry
of Education and Training). In stage two of this research, there were
almost three times more males than females, and of the female responses
evaluated, the top five overall ranked responses belonged to females.
Broken down by group and gender, the responses appear as follows:
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Test Group (SMART
Board)
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Control Group
(Blackboard)
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Male
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Female
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Male
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Female
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| 4 |
3 |
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4 |
11 |
| 1 |
8.5 |
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3 |
4 |
| 2 |
1.5 |
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2.5 |
6 |
| 1 |
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2 |
7 |
| 5 |
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2 |
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| 1.5 |
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1.5 |
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| 1 |
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4 |
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| 2.5 |
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| Mean = 2.25 |
Mean = 4.33 |
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Mean = 2.71 |
Mean = 7.0 |
Female participants in the control group
still outperformed the female participants in the SMART Board test group;
however, the difference between the male participants was null. This
may indicate that the difference in performance between the control
and test group has more to do with gender than with the technology with
which they are working. The gender results do support current research
on gender and language performance (Gormley, 1992; Thomas, 1994); ergo,
regardless of the SMART Board, one of the largest differences in
the groups' performances appears to be due to their sex. A study involving
a homogeneous group of one gender would eliminate this distinction.
Besides the difference in gender performance,
each group displayed a different predilection towards one particular
question. The majority of the SMART Board test group (55%) for example,
chose to write on the following Quick-Quill question: "Wouldn't you
have liked to perform a little magic on Malfoy to make him pay for some
of his nasty actions?" (Question 5, Stage One). The test group's top
three answers (8.5, 5, and 4) all responded to this question. It is
also the only question developed in stage one that required an answer
specifically dealing with magic. Since none of the other Quick-Quill
questions require the student to create a scenario based on an unknown
world, this level of creativity may have hindered some of the more creative
writers in this group. It is interesting to note, however, that the
SMART Board participants were more interested in questions relating
to magic, and the use of magic. This may indicate, as we had originally
hypothesized, that the SMART Board did introduce a unique element of
a type of "magic" for the students working on these creative
responses.
The control group, on the other hand, most
frequently (40%) chose question 2 from stage one of the research, or,
"You did extremely well in your first attempt at flying, and that was
with a standard-issue school broomstick. Do you think having a Nimbus
2000 will help you that much more, or could you be a Quidditch champion
with any broomstick?" The "most creative" responses from the group wrote
on this particular question.
In summary, although the SMART Board test
group did not outperform the blackboard control group with "more creative"
responses during stage two of the research, they did identify a well-documented
distinction between gender abilities at age twelve (Gormley, 1992; Thomas,
1994), and they did identify those questions that are most likely to
elicit more creative responses from students studying Harry Potter
in the intermediate years. Rather than a conclusion to this research,
what follows is a portion of the curriculum, using the questions from
stage one, which was able to be developed from the SMART Board technology.
Developing a Harry Potter Curriculum
Once questions, which work towards
stimulating good creative writing, are developed, teachers often look
for ways to "publish" such work in a classroom setting. It is appropriate,
at this point of the curriculum, if students can generate publishing
ideas of their own. The students involved in the SMART Board research
took all of their creative responses, from both groups, and merged them
together to create their own "Daily Prophet" newspaper,
a news flyer that they thought would resemble Rita Skeeter's column
in Rowling's Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire (2000). Below
is an illustration of this paper, as the students themselves conceived
it, unedited, in its original form:
THE
DAILY PROPHET
THE DAILY PROPHET
A
RITA SKEETER EXCLUSIVE
INTERVIEW WITH HARRY POTTER
Using her
famous "Quick-quill" to "puncture many an inflated ego", our own Rita
Skeeter captured a rare interview with the now famous Harry Potter.
Here are some of the questions she asked Harry:
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You did extremely
well in your first attempt at flying, and that was with a standard-issue
school broomstick . Do you think having a Nimbus 2000 will help
you that much more , or could you be a Quidditch champion with
any broomstick ?
It just so happens
that Harry Potter reported to me that he obviously would want
a Nimbus 2000 to win a Quidditch match just after his appearance
of almost swallowing the snitch in his second match verse Slytherin.
Harry also reported to me that Quirrell was jinxing Harry’s broom,
but Hermione reported to me that she thought Professor Snape was
behind it. (Adam)
After talking awhile about Quidditch,
we got on the subject of the first day. When I asked him if he
could be a Quidditch Champion with any broom, he replied snobbily,
"Of course I could. But now I’m so rich, I don’t have to.
And I don’t think that my admirers would appreciate me on a Comet
two-sixty." Well, what a snobby, rude, and rich little kid!
What is our world coming to! (Emily)
Harry Potter, the flying fraud? How
would it be possible for a "muggle made wizard" to attempt an
amazing lift off such as he did on his first try? Well this newly
introduced wizard has quite some talent or does he? He claims
"of course I could win the Quidditch Championship on any broomstick,
unlike any other player on my team. I thought it was a joke, but
the young orphan Potter re-assured me that he was the best of
his kind. Talking about Neville Longbottom, Potter says, "he is
so slow that a garden gnome could catch him by the end of his
broom; and if he was on the Quidditch team, we would lose by minus
points." He also said that a Nimbus 2000 was a push over (he could
win with it easily) but what he wanted was a Fire Bolt and he'd
do anything to get it. Anything...
This shy little fellow
isn't keeping his thoughts to himself, he suggests that his team-mates
should be very grateful and should promote him to captain. He
said he would not be surprised if they said "no", and that they
should all be jealous. (Sadie)
"Well, even though he is a
total klutz and a dimwit and a huge dummy, he is still a part
of the Gryffindor team". Implied Harry "He has some
good quality’s, I think." He said. (Marc)
Na, I don’t need
no stupid Nimbus 2000 to be a Quidditch Champion. (Taylor)
What do you
remember about your mother and father; how does it feel being
an orphan, and how do you feel about the man who did this to your
parents?
Even though I didn’t
get to know my parents very well I think they were the best parents
in the world. When you’re an orphan, put yourself in my shoes
for instance, you think you can do anything without your parents
telling you, but after a while you remember how much time they
spent with you. I don’t know why a man killed my parents. If he
hated my parents he had no right to kill them. When I become a
real wizard I would like to seek revenge!!!!! (Alyson)
The 14 year old boy got the answer
pretty fast like he was waiting a long time to get it off his
chest, but he did not say too much about his parents thou I think
I made him remember something horrible from a long time ago. (Chris)
Harry sadly doesn’t remember his
parents he just wishes he could see them.
He is devastated the dark killed
his parents! With a dark red face he said
He wanted to triumph
over dark! (Alexander)
Young Harry Potter
is extremely sad about his parents death and is in complete hatred
of he who should not be named. (Chris)
When you had
the Philosopher’s Stone in your pocket, did it cross your mind
to use it to make the nectar that allows everlasting life? Would
you even want to live forever?
Oh, yes it did! But
then it crossed my mind that people would find out and they’d
know what an evil mind I have, so I didn’t. And yes, I would like
to live forever, with my fame. (Braydon)
"I’ve never told anybody this"
said young Harry Potter slyly "but I only say ‘Voldemort’
to impress my friends and fans." Brave Harry Potter hesitated
before saying the Dark Lord’s name, and goes on to say "I
really am actually very frightened of the Dark Lord, after all,
look at what he did to my parents, I only got away because I’m
lucky." It’s obvious that Harry Potter is not all that people
think he is. (Landon)
Wouldn’t you
have liked to perform all little magic on Malfoy, to make him
pay for some of his nasty actions?
At this question
Harry Potter the famous wizard flipped.
"Of course I would
have loved to get Malfoy back, I mean think of all the things
he has done to me. From the very first time I met him in I knew
he was really bad news. I mean his blonde hair and long nose.
He reminded me of Snape a lot, maybe they are related. Anyway
he has always hated me. He wants to watch me fail. The way he
tease’s my parent’s is just….just…too much…"
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At this point Harry
had to leave because he was too sad about his mother and father
and how that awful Draco Malfoy teased him shame on you!
"Mad eye is the best
he turned Malfoy into a ferret and I thank him for that. Malfoy
better watch his back, because I know very well that all fellow
Gryffindors would love to zap him good and so do I. He is always
ruining my fun and everything I try to do he also tries to do
that too. I mean remember when I was the seeker on the Quidditch
team, Malfoy that very next year happened top be playing seeker
on the Slytherin team. Then when he finally found out he was no
good he tried to make look bad top by holding the back of my broom.
What a copycat. I can’t wait to get out of Hogwarts to zap Malfoy
from here to Canada. I am going to ruin your life Malfoy liked
you ruined mine. MALFOY you have been warned."
(Hannah)
The 14 year old boy
got the answer pretty fast like he was waiting a long time to
get it off his chest, but he did not say too much about his parents
though I think I made him remember something horrible from a long
time ago. (Joel)
Actually, I would
love to get my hands on that greasy slime ball but I am Harry
Potter, the best wizard in the world and the most handsome boy
in Hogwarts and I don’t think being mean to somebody even someone
like Malfoy , a dirty, horrible person, would be fair. And in
my deep, loyal heart I know that even though Malfoy is mean, I
am a GREAT person and I would never try to get even with him.
(Ozge)
When asked of hurting
the young boy Malfoy I could tell a surge of rage and fury come
over the boy. The young Harry Potter is well versed in some of
the most gruesome spells and charms. Harry said through gritted
teeth he has pictures of Malfoy shredded and melted covering his
bed. "Watch out Malfoy, Harry’s going to get you." (Casey)
"Definitely!"
snickered Harry evilly "He is the meanest, slimiest git I’ve
ever met!" yelled Harry "I would love to put an end
to his schemes. Maybe a wizard’s duel…" and Harry went on
with his horrible plans, which are to horrible to describe. (Kieran)
No, not really!
Of course I would
have loved to swipe Draco’s sly smile off of his face. I would
have gotten him good, but I didn’t want to get expelled from Hogwarts.
Now I’m warning Draco to stay away from me! Or else!! (Ruwan)

I would like to perform
every nasty spell on Malfoy that I have learned. I would perform
the body locker curse then beat him up. (Matt)
"Yes, Malfoy
needs a good smack for what he’s done. I’d like to cast a very
strong spell on him. Maybe the imperial curse, make a fool of
himself in front of the whole school." Said Harry So Harry
really wants revenge on Malfoy. Harry says that Malfoy has always
insulted him and his friends especially Hermione who is half-muggle,
half-witch. (Patrick)
Many believe
that Neville Longbottom should not belong to Gryffindor, or for
that matter, shouldn’t be at Hogwarts at all, given that he is
such a klutz and a dimwit. What is your opinion on the matter
of muggles?
Harry admitted that
he thinks muggles are extremely stupid, and do not have any sense
at all. He also agreed that Neville Longbottom should be kicked
out of Hogwarts, because he was probably going to fail anyway,
with all his clumsiness. (Laryssa)
"I have pity on that poor Longbottom
boy. Of course no wizard can match my wizardry skills." Boasted
Harry Potter with a sneer, that sunny afternoon in Hogwarts. "Neville
is an idiot and a very clumsy boy. But for me to keep up my famous
reputation I must put up with him." Harry said glumly. During
the rest of the interview Harry continued to pass out rude comments
about this poor and misunderstood boy. What does Harry really
think of you? (Deniz)
Do you think I am beautiful?
Who is the most beautiful witch you have ever met at Hogwarts?
Yes I think you are the most beautiful
person I have met at Hogwart’s. Even more beautiful than my perfect
girlfriend Hermione Granger. I love everything about you you’re
nice curly hair you’re great glasses and you’re glamorous
robes. I hope to be seeing you again. With a smile on Harry’s
face. (Guino)
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Endnotes
i. The "Quick-Quill Quotes" are magical, sensational, heretical
responses to questions, as the introductory excerpt from Harry Potter
and the Goblet of Fire illustrates.
ii. Responses with the highest TTCT score.
iii. In stage one, there were some technical problems with e-mail, as
noted.
References
Gormley, Kathleen. (1992). Gender
Differences in Classroom Writing: An analysis of sixth grade students'
reader response entries. Northeastern Educational Research Association,
Oc. 27-28.
Ontario Ministry of Education and Training.
(2000) EQAO Assessment: Grade 3. Toronto: Queen's Printer.
Rowling, J.K. (2000). Harry Potter
and the Goblet of Fire. London: Bloomsbury Publishing.
Thomas, Peter. (1994). Writing, Reading,
and Gender. Gifted Education International, 9(3): 154-158.
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